by xXxMYSTERIOUSxXx May 22, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
love is
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Everyone seeks and searches ~ fumbling in their grasping lurches ~ reaching and hoping and crying ~ wishing with all their heart that maybe this one time love will be something more than just another night of praying ~ We wait and hope and search and seek ~ finding moments alone when we're so weak ~ on our knees with just us and god ~ and find the courage to get upon our feet and on we plod ~ holding out holding on ~ stumbling on ~ waiting wishing ~ missing whats lost and whats to be ~ everything seems so stark while waiting for that hand in the dark ~ a scent a smell a familiar touch ~ aching for it seems to much ~ that missing ~ ... kissing ... a taste a touch a feel ~ everything that makes life special and real ~ we wait and we hope and pray ~ holding on everyday for one more day ~ of what makes life special ~ something to break through our self made shell ~ Waiting for the right words ~ the right feel ~ that one person that holds the perfect appeal ~ someone to make us live again ~ to look the Heavens and SCREAM "AMEN!" ~ A hand to hold ~ a heart to call your own ~ to not be alone ~ to dream and hope ~ a hand to help you cope ~ A special way to kiss you ~ someone to say they miss you ~ A gentle gift ~ something to close the rift between you and the world ~ to regain the sanity from witch you were hurled ~ We wait and we hope and we pray each and everyone of us ~ all waiting for another day ... |
by Meggie33
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You have a unique writing style... ive never ever seen a poem like that.... i like the style a lot... but in the future i would say you should probably try to break it down into seperate lines, becaue it is kind of difficult to follow the flow of the poem when its all in one big paragraph... but aside from the setup of it... i really liked the meaning... don't be offended by that ^^^^ just take my advise into consideration... lotsaluv... |