Hm. I liked this. Theres just something about it. The last stanza stood out the most to me. It really brought out the poem. I'm not sure what it's meant to mean, But the way you worded it was fantastic. A really good job. Keep it up. 5/5
I liked your word choices. It made it flow really well. The Detail was great, made me slightly Ill just reading it. Which is good, I like poems to make me feel something. I actually liked it. Great Write.
This poem reminds me of how I have been feeling recently on and off. To me it feels as if something bad happened around this time of year or maybe that's because in my experinance tomorrow will be two years since I went through something bad. Your word choice really brought that feeling alive--though it kind of hurt to have that feeling again just from reading your words. I like the idea of the, "What if's." I've been asking a couple of those myself lately. Your imagery is vivid and the sensations are instantly brought to life. One of your better poems.
Good detail and expression in this peice, your word choice and progression are excelent. as far as interpretaion goes i think it may be one of those peices with several potential meanings... one where you read it more than once and never get the same expiriance, it's brilliant how you do this so effectivly. the descriptions are very vivid and well placed runing into one another well never sounding over powering nor weak. fantastically written peice.
I know every person has their own meaning for poems, and there are things you write that speak to me, and no one else can hear, including you. This poem was really well written, and you chose your words well, with a few additional 'symbols' (aka "-") to help you bring your points across. Spring, it usually means 'love is in the air' but not for everyone. Awesome stuff.
I have to wonder whats happening in the poem... whats happening this time of the year to make you feel this way? this is a very interesting peice and you kept my full attention throughout. I really liked it 5/5 -jen-
No explanation necessary.....
....and so very-well articulated.....
*My suggestion: Get some white sage....burn a lot of it......and, do something.....several other things....that are joyous, celebratory, enjoyable and above all, Beautiful.......this time....at That Time
Of The Year.....Give To Yourself Something Else To Feel....and To Remember.....A New Inspiration For A New Poem.....
This is really good.. I love the way that you went into detail about what you were feeling but not about why you felt that way. That way more people can relate to it. You chose your words very well, It was really good and left a strong impact on me, brought up many memoires of a certain "time of the year". I definitely get what you were trying to say in this (in general) and you did a great job.. I absolutely loved it!
Hm..so many interpretations but this poems has many vivid visualization but the textures and the FLAVORS, I tell you..I damn well could taste every feeling..It was like going through a menu of different flavors. Anyways, this poem is definitely unique..I found it quite appealing..especially when it enhances your taste buds. I must be very hungry..Well, anyways Kudos to you, this poem is very very interesting.
Wow so much goign on in this poem its wonderful i love the way u discribed your feelings in this sort of way
it reminded me of how i was feeling th eother day sad and depressed and i felt the anger and i felt like my hole body should just shut down 5/5