Omg this is so sweet great job...and keep up the writting. i tell my bf the same things u tell ur boy in this poem....very sweet

This is so good, i really enjoyed reading it.
it's quite amazing
well done!

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Oh my gosh. lol I have the same problem with umm I guess I could call him 'my' guy... long story. lol Anyway great poem. If you work on your structure you could be an even better writter than you already are. =)
~anne~

Oh yay this is so great
very emotional and full of love and desire!!!
sweet poem honey, I envy this guy =P
I loved yout title so much, very great and captivating!
Keep it up
I'm so sorry I kno my reply is tooo late, I never noticed that I hvn't commented ur poem!
Luv Ya
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