Nice poem
well spoken
easy to understand
good work...5/5

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This is a great poem it talks about all the love have inside u and all the love u have to give i wish u would just show it more on the outside so everyone esle can know how much love u have to share... i wish u could just be happy wit what u have or had but for some reason i dont think u will ever be happy untill everything is in its place... i hope u know that noo matter what i will always be here for u though the good times and the bad ones too...sometimes i think u forget that ...u know one of the things i hate about u is that u never feel like u can talk to me... u talk... but sometimes u hold things back and i know u do... all i want is for u to share but i KNOW u cant so i am here and i will always listen to wat u are willing to tell me ... all i want is for u to be happy and if it is not wit rami then maybe someone esle will come into ur life and make u happy and not make ur stomach turn upside down... i am sorry ur first love is gone i hoped.. ohh nevermind its ok wat i hoped does not matter anyways babes i am here always
i love u
take care
xoxo
robyn