Wow this is really good
i loved every last bit
bit weak in the middle
but still brilliant!
well done...5/5

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Omg girlll lovi8n this poem. whoa u were gone fo months? where did ya go? anyways ur new stuff is good. mine is crap, iv sorta lost my sparks these few months :( anyways 5/5

Really good... love it 5/5