Speechless(finished)

by RadianceInReverse   May 24, 2006


I sit here with my hair amess
looking ratty in a old worn out dress
You say to me
"you look as beautiful as ever, you leave me breathless"

You leave me speechless
every-time you say such words that make me blush
I wanna cry cause those words mean so much

You make me feel so beautiful
cared for and loved
Ive never been so happy
never been so in love

Your words make me float
like a stunning soaring dove
your laughter brings happiness to my walk
your smile makes my heart beat like an atomic clock

I cant stand when I dont feel your loving touch
Cause I love you just so damn much!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Oh and thanks for the comment you have me on my poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    This poem was so sweet. The rhyming was good for the most part and the flow was off a little but overall it was a great poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Wow....really good.....I like it...no I love it.....truly beautiful....

  • 17 years ago

    by Ella

    I like it, i like it, i like it......i really, really like it.....you gave it a perfect finish

  • 17 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Well....keep it coming...very beatiful so far....yeah....can't wait to read the rest of it....lataz

    Robert.