Good work. keep writting.
best of luck

Its a very sweet and inspirational piece if I may there are some small alterations I would like to make note of that might make it flow better but this is just in my opinion :)

"You listen,
To show me you care."

"You ask for help,
To make me feel needed."

Please keep writing :)

I liked it

Wow, i like your short but tasty style, lol

It is always wonderful when you find someone who cares 4 u as deeply as u described in the poem.

This is such a good love poem. i love it. i hope he treats u right

Wow i really like this a lot. its cute simple and to the point! yr a good writer:)5/5