Holy crap, I love it! It's just my style. The word "haunting" in the seventh line says it all. Truly magnificent Kim, bravo. :)

Wow... Dark and mysterious. Wonderfully written. Quite haunting. As said above "haunting" on the 7th line brings out the darkness of this poem.

I'm just wondering, bt did u enter this 4 a contest? lol, anyway gr8 work i loved this poem, it had a lot of details

Wow this is marvelous. Simply Breathtaking. I'm at a loss of words for this one. I loved it!!

I like this poem. It was very well written.

And TeufelKind Is German actually. =) Which Means Devil Child Or Devils Child.

Iloved this poem so much, welcome to my favorites list. Timothy r

Wow, that is so powerful and so intense! i loved it.. the descriptions were brilliant.. wow.. i really loved that! its metaphoric in a way, but just a truly excellent poem! the imagery was great, it flowed well, and your use of language worked reallly well! 5/5 p.s. thanks for the comment, i agree that she shouldn't have been in that section lol.. xox!

Very nice poem. I really liked your word choice in this. It gave it abit more strength to the poem. Awesome job =) 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Omg! this is incredible 5/5! great poem!