Im sorry but u might get comments if u actually wrote this in english and in order for me to read it to.
So if u get the chance comment me and telll me this in english in order for me to understand it. aight,

Jay Jay

Kayi sapno ko tootthe dekha,
Per filhaal mujhe is sapne mein jeena hai

i m sure that u r not aware of what u hv written here, this is just something that straight away blew my mind & soul, though whole poem is absolutely amazing but i just loved loved loved these last lines, welcome back, u seems to be in ur form.. :o)

all the best and take care

Kayi sapno ko tootthe dekha,
Per filhaal mujhe is sapne mein jeena hai

wow dear that got a tear in my eye. ur so good at hindi poems yaar...5/5.....keep it up huni this is great.

i love it

sonam