Aww, that is really sad. You did a great job at expressing your emotions on this, it sounds like it came straight from your heart. Great job!

Ohww tine that was so sad ='(
I'm here for you, girl x

Hey your poem was awsume

I really loved this poem, especially "I guess your sparkles now are bruised
by my tears that hit them so deep" And the last two lines, but the rhythm was a little interupted at times, maybe try dividing it into stanzas so you don't have to hunt for the rhymes as much. But over all, great poem, keep it up.

--Steph

Really good flow.
I liked it :)