Wow i love the stlye of your writing and the waythis poem is written very good iv not seen a poem like this before=]
very good

Wow i love the stlye of your writing and the waythis poem is written very good iv not seen a poem like this before=]
very good

I loved this. I can relate so much, execpt more in a different way. Really good poem though. Thought it was awesome. Keep it up. 5/5

`taleee xx

Fantastic peice, i love the rhyme scheme it is very unique but works really well. the content is well portrayed with some strong expressions. overall great write

5/5

I like this

its flows really fast

and its not even forced

5/5 it seems likemaybe
someone she loved or he loved

took advantage of them and raped/ect something to them

abused i guess good write 5/5

Wow, this was a really good poem. Lots of emotion in this one. This is a hard topic to talk about... The rhyme scheme in this one was really different, I really liked it. Good stuff.

WOW! great job! you could really feel the emotion with your words! 5/5
Bloomed Rose

Aww thats sad but very well written well done xxxxx