by Nazmus Sehar May 26, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
first love
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O, my loving and caring friend, |
by Miz Erotica
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You need to work on ur meter, but I love ur word choice and the poem in general. Keep writing. Comment and come by soon! |
by Chelsea
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I liked it, there was a few rough spots but rhymes are hard to do. You did a great job on it. I like it. It flows nicely off the tongue. keep up the good work! |