My superman

by Nazmus Sehar   May 26, 2006


O, my loving and caring friend,
you cannot make my feelings end.
your crystal eyes create an image of sparkle,
and facinated me like the words of bible.
when you speak to people bravely
i just look at your lips, which seems to me heavenly.
your curly and wavy hair
grown your courage not to care.
your energy just seems to flow,
you sure lie to be on to go.
your chest and muscle make your enemy lies.
so,i want to loook at the world through your eyes.
you are as brave as lion,
you save me like a net of iron.
i am really impressed by your vigor and zest.
and you are always friendly with your guest.
so loving,concerned and good hearted,
from you i will not wanted to be parted.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Miz Erotica

    You need to work on ur meter, but I love ur word choice and the poem in general. Keep writing. Comment and come by soon!

  • 19 years ago

    by Chelsea

    I liked it, there was a few rough spots but rhymes are hard to do. You did a great job on it. I like it. It flows nicely off the tongue. keep up the good work!

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