Hmmm....that's actually really creative. I like how nothing is really stated plainly but left to stimulate the mind.

That was great!! can't wait to read the rest!

5/5!

It's quite a good poem so far. coming along nicely. Very very good flow. beautiful

Hmmmm...i still say that's great and peachy.

Im very intruiged by your poem
very nice work from your excellency
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Very nice.

Interesting style you have! Good! 5/5