Very touching words. it's easy to see the pain that fills your heart. yet, reading this tells us that love can melt the boundaries between you and your child.

good luck and peace

shobhana

Hey darl a very t0uchng piece very heartfelt g0od j0b 0n it, keep it up

This poem expresses a fathers love so beautifully and the flow and chice of words added to the heartfelt message
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This is a magnificent poem. It portrays the selfless love of every parent. Great write, it deserves to be at the top.

This poems is absolutely astounding.....very touching and heartfelt! Its clear for anyone who reads this to clearly see and feel the emotions you ahv put forward.! well done!

This poems is absolutely astounding.....very touching and heartfelt! Its clear for anyone who reads this to clearly see and feel the emotions you ahv put forward.! well done!

BEATIFUL!!!!!!!!! ALMOST SHED A TEAR!!!! BUT THE WORDS USED AND DESCRIPTION, I FELT LIKE I KNEW THE PEOPLE AND FELT THE GUYS FEELING! GREAT WRITING!!!*****

And never feel the love of my father......keep up the good work...hes such a lucky son...

Thats soooo good i almost cried

This part my dear sir is so heartfully touching . The words of a true father spoken with so much love .

Divorce is so cruel sometimes
but son know in your heart
as vainly I try to express the words
that I have never or will never
Divorce you.. but always, even apart,
be within reach always there

Such a heart touching poem , the feeling of 'forever' love just flows through the whole poem . Though you can feel the presense of the ' being apart ' sadness , the power of the love felt , sent and received is proof that he will always be in your heart .

A wonderfully written piece.

It is so good that you can write this beautiful poetry for your son to read someday. I`m saddened that you only get that small amount of time with him.It seems like the good dads are the ones that get treated so badly. my heart is with you and him.

You really got the talent in writting poems you should never stop! awsome poem!

I really wished I had read this part first, I had to go back and read the 2nd part to this again, and it became more emotional. These two poems were very special, and it was a very good dedication. Awesome!

Wonderful poem!!!! a very touching peice of poetry you have written =] 5/5