I loved it...that was Truly an amazing poem.with detail, and rhyme.everything was great. and i think you got your message across pretty well
keep it up
5/5
~MF~

I think the message came across well, maybe it was because we were looking for it but all the same it was a good poem
well done
xxxx

Great poem.. well done xx

Uplifting baby baby, a beautiful poem, you're such a good person, you care about other people and it shows
love you
x