A very sweet poem this is!
i like it:D
cheers

Woah... Deep write sir Bill. You've conveyed your feelings about a lost love nicely. Here's to hoping it's doesn't get lost.

Thats very good.

Keep it up

Bill,
Extroadinary, one word, extroadinary. Nothing else to say. Crazy good.
Love,
Jamie

Wow
never read anything lyk this
its gd
keep it up
love dia

A very despeciptive and powerful piece

all th best

Tht is v.g

A very true to live poem puts you right inside it too great job on the poem just a thought its not you going though this

Wow, i loved that poem, it was sad but full of emotion and it was expressive too, keep writing my friend
xxx