This was just beautiful, I loved it. It had such an amazing flow, the use of rhyme was really effective; I'd love to hear this put to music! Great write, 5/5 x

I love to hear this sung you have an amazing tallent keep writting!
See you round the site =)
Luv Z.

I love the emotion expressed in the lyrics. I would like to hear them sung

Aww.. that is such a sweet and amazing poem! i extremely enjoyed reading it.. it had a good rythym and there was plenty of love and emotion flowing throughout! great work! 5/5

That's lovely. I really like it. The flow of the lyrics and wording was amazing. Great Job.

Omg!!! this was sooo pretty!!!! there was an awesome flow and such deep emotions!!! i would love to hear this played!!!! -Jen- 5/5

I like the poem as a whole...It made me feel like there is someone out there for me...

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This was outstanding. 10/5!!!. Good job keep it up..

Awww.. a very sweet poem.. i liked how you repeated one of the stanza's again at the end.. it had a nice affect.. this flowed well most of the time, used good descriptions and was very sweet and full of love.. nice job! 5/5

Great poem really nice it flowed wonderfully keep up the good work