This sooo good you!!!!!!!! WOW i think is all i can say! keep up the good work love linda marie

I just cried...amazing poem...i grew up like that 5/5

Loved the repetition. Makes the line stand out and makes the reader think why that line is so important.
I hope the storyline is just made-up and not really happening in your life.
Regardless, good work.

...Best one I've read of your's so far.
This, my dear, is frikken amazing.
The imagery, the flow, the repetition, it all flows together to create the most moving piece...beautifully written and yet so heartbreaking to read.

Wow intense poem..but very well done.

It was realy good nice w0rk