Do I Love You..Yes I Do..

by China   May 29, 2006


I always ask myself If I really do love you
and everytime i do
I always come to the conclusion
that i really do
And it sucks knowing that i care about u so much
but when it comes to me
You make it seem like if we can't be

I know that i cause a lot of arguments
And a whole shit of fights
I apologize for that
I can't seem to control myself
Maybe one day but hopefully now,
You feel the way i do.

I dont wanna lose you
And it's hard to let go
But if i have to and you want to
then i will, but let me tell you this
I want to tell you that i love you
And i need you by my side
And in the future wherever we may be
You'll always have a part of me
Even if we couldn't be

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    In my opinion, this is a good starter for a poem, but it has no rhythm and the rhyming is all over the place. Either stick to a specific rhyme scheme, or don't have one at all. You have a lot of emotion in this that you clearly want to portray, but if you present it better, people will be more willing to read it, and understand how you feel. Also, you wrote 'loose' when it should be 'lose'.Keep writing

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