Comments : She watched her mother die

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Wow that was really deep i really liked it good job

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    God,this is amazing,emotional,good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Great poem
    but the poem
    was really well written
    you are good with the flow
    and i like the plot but it is sad
    good job

    Keenan

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    Very well written and easy to read. Good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Awww..im sorry to hear that...dun worry..i know ur brave and will be alrite...keep writtin...gj...

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    That made me cry... it's sooo true how many parents stay together for the sake of their children while clearly they can't be together cuz they're always arguing and stuff and at the end it's the child who gets affected the most, and children always blame themselves even cuz they were the reason their parents stayed together!

  • 16 years ago

    by XDeesxToxicxCookiesX

    So sad...=(
    keep up the gd work..