Comments : Goodbye

  • 18 years ago

    by gone back to him

    Omg I know exactly how you feel. My mom treated me like a daughter the first 3 years of my life, but then my brother and sister came along and all I was, was a babysitter. She has been treating me this way for 11 years now, but she's trying to change, and all I can tell you is to believe, it can change, but only if you really truly want it too. If you want to, read my poem, "Moms", its alot like yours.

    Hugs-Kisses-and-Peace

    Sabrina Nicole

  • 18 years ago

    by teagan

    I like how you rhyme in every poem

  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Oh sweetie that is so sad. At first I thought it was about a friend but the lines

    to love me because you want to not because it's the mother thing to do.

    really hit hard.
    Very well written. nice job.