Comments : I Wish You Were Here

  • 17 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Awww *tear*

    *hugs you*, aw the wonders of teendom and broken hearts, described beautifuly and wonderfully. Your flow was ace and diction was prefection M'dear:

    But that never brings you back,
    Cause you left without a care.

    I'm broken and ripped apart,
    I wish I could go back to the start,

    Love! I hope your okay

    ♥ Jenn

    if you need anything I'm here:]

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, this is another great poem by you, you are so great..... and one of my favorite

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    I gave this poem 5/5 because it was a great poem and i can definetly relate to it..i love poems that i can relate to. great work!

  • 17 years ago

    by I Love You

    Aww sad but can relate

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Aww this is so sad.. I can actually relate to this poem! the emotions was raw.. the flow was perfect well done! :) 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by miss4re

    HEY KRISTINA, I REALLY ENJOYED YOUR POEM. YOU CAN READ MY ONE IF YOU LIKE, ITS CALLED DEAR DAWSON. KEEP IT UP