what a powerful flippin poem....wowww...I mean, first you wanted to make me cry apparently by beating up this poor dog :( and then I wanted to cry at the end because of the state of affairs in our sorry ass world. This was an excellent story, with a very compelling moral to it...wow. I will keep lookin for ya of course..take care, Luv Michelle :)

I can't believe you have a 3.7 on this so far as of now....people must be blind I swear..I, of course, gave you a five..it's a very important topic and what a unique way to look at it...luv..

M you are far too sweet, but please dont stop. This was meant to be an experiment, to see if i could sustain the rhyme and throw in meaningful words. I prefere free form poetry but having read a lot of your work lately I thought I`d take the plunge. Found it quite restricting at times, but when the right word popped into my head it was quite rewarding. As ever thanx again for your encouraging words

I'm sorry, but I couldn't read it...I begain reading it, got to the 2nd verse, and quit...I hurridly got out, I'm sorry, I'm sure it was a great poem, but I just couldn't read somethin like that, I would break down crying, and right now I need not to cry, I'm sorry once again, But knowing something like that happened, breaks my heart in two...even if it wasn't true, i really dont' think that I couldnt' read it anyway

my god i'm crying as i write this.
that was aweful what happened
how you captured the meaning my god
you are a fantastic writter,
amazing i love all of your poetry,
i'm lost for words truley amazing
never stop
love always
lorna
xxx

I never ever expected that to end the way it did. WOW...I don't even know what to say. It's so sad...Excellent poem!! Keep it up and take care..