That is a beautiful poem. Excellent my dear. So sad, so pitiful but brilliant.

That is so sad!! Good Poem

Very nice poem, this is really good. I love the flow, and the rhymes. I don't really think there is anyting you can do to improve it:D

This poem was great... good job keep it up....

Ack the poem that won my contest lol I LOVED IT seriously! you did a great job on it and there was nothing wrong with it, its perfect!! *smiling* well had to let you no!! great job 5/5

KurMiT

This poems is wonderful. It's beauitful. Congrads on the contest, you deserved it.

-ifihide