This was really good! I loved how you asked questions. It really makes the reader think. The flow and rhyme scheme were spot on. Theres not a thing I think bad of in this peice. It was beautifuly done. 5/5

`Taleee

W.o.w.. you are an amazing writer!! this poem was excellent, the metaphorical flow of it was wonderful, and the brilliant descriptions were just perfect.. all your rhymes worked well and i believe this was one of the best poems i have ever read! great write! 10/5

Interesting questions. I've written a tiny bit on infinity, and read some things about it.

I thought that this poem was fascinating both scientifically and philosophically, and it kept up with its difficult rhyme scheme (AABB is usually my least favorite rhyme scheme) without losing a single philosophical stride.

This was beautifully written! I absolutely LOVE your word choice! GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!! 5/5

"Must the randomness of my thoughts drive me insane?"

I love the whole poem but THAT line just rocked my kazbah. Great job.

I liked the second last stanza so much, I thought it would be better to finish with it, but nothing to subtract from a superb poem 5/5
Good writing - DM

I am so sorry for reading this later than I said I would.
If a mile was an inch, or a second was a year
[An opening line which makes the reader think and grabs their attention.]
This poem though it rhymes makes nothing seemed forced. I love how you use other wods instead of the same old same old and it's scientific in a way which is different than some I read.

That really was a wonderful poem... you really have talent 5/5