It was kinda long, but a good poem! always, bri

AMAZING!
Darnit i'm more or less jealous!
And "only" fourteen years old, sweet work!

Please do keep it up!

/Bluey the amazed

Very nice... Dark and horrible, the way I love it! A bit long though... And I really dislike all the !!'s you use... Your poems speak for themselves, I'd really take them all out...

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Ohhhhh. I liked this one as well. Really long, but it was worht reading. I love your poems. You are very talented. :]

Great poem. long but not as long as some i've written =P i liked it. very good imagery.

Good flow as well. The aabb rhme scheme worked well and it was a smooth read.

great write

Wow. Just...Wow. Lol. I loved it. =) The flow was excellent, and it stayed all the way through the poem. The rhymes seemed a little easy though. I'm sure you could do better. I also liked the idea of the Devil taking your life in general. Very creative. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow...awsome once again!!!! this poem gives me the chills also!! a 5/5 for me!!

Wow you got the imagination goin in this poem!!!! when i was reading it i went deep in the poem, with the flow and the words u used!

That was an amazing poem! Really makes you think. I love the concept behind the story. You're a good writer, don't waste this talent =)

This was another really good one. I love the topic, its one that I like to write about. Keep up the good work.