That is painfully beautiful, i used to be like that girl..., always hiding the hurt emotions inside and put on a fake smile to hide the loneliness inside... but something tragic made me snap out ot if... because it wasnt just me anymore.. but i will forever carry pain... hope that girl found happiness and peace that she saught in the end. hope it was all worth it, worth dieing for....

it was a brilliant write....keep it up
5/5
-faithfulserenity

This poem was filled with such emotion, I think it was such a creative piece

take care

dave x