Excellent poem! Wow! I loved it, you are right it is extremely unique. Beautiful write, I don't know what to say, you will love the site, and I cant wait to read more of your brilliant works! Welcome and take care! 5/5

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Wow. This must have been hard to do. With all the E words. Very nice poem though. I liked it alot! Keep it up! 5/5

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This is a great poem, it's so original. I love the words that you used.

Great job! 5/5

Hey you. as you know i like it. but i knew you wanted comments. sooo. i like:
Evaporating wisps of thought, gave glimpses of her facE
Engineering a picture in my mind, I could not erasE
and
Engaging her guarded feelings, trying to corrodE
Enormous walls which surround her inner desirE
Exploding from within, comes her loving firE
nice job

Hi its really good i loved it and you could really feel it