Comments : The Strongest Weakness

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Awwww Carlee, you poetic genius, ice scorpian polar bear woman!! I love you!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    -Claps hands- This was brillant! Last stanza would have to be my favourite. I really loved this poem. Awesome job! 5/5

    `Taleee xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    I really liked this poem. Good imagery and description. 'dark angels', that would have to be the coolest image. Awesome poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    Imagery is fantastic in this write. A sorrowful poem that captures the reader until the end.
    My favorite stanza was:
    But the voices are not sweet
    And the angel's tears, they fall
    In this corner, a broken heart
    Surrounded by pain's wall.

    It finished the poem of powerfully.

  • 17 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Great imagery throughout. Dark and powerful! Enjoyable read.

  • 17 years ago

    by Linds

    I like it..keep it up =D