It is deffinatly one of the better poems you made :),pretty well written and flows well :)
just 2 (small) things:
in the third stanza :whats=what's
and the first line of the fourth stanza:"The friend the will always "maybe "that will always"
ppl here really dislike small speling or other mistakes
no critics, just help
its a very good poem:)
keep it up

I really love your poetry. :)

Thats amazin!! wow girl talent!!! xxxxxxx

This is an excellent poem. My favorite. I would give it more than a 5 if I could, but a 5 will have to do. :)

I love this poem, i write some like this, its very sad but good :)

Woah... this poem kinda scared me... no offense it was good i just had a lil tear...

I can relate to that poem sooooooo much, I thought it was really well written.

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Wow. Dark. It's a excellent write.

The friend that will always remain in my heart
This friend of mine is the romantic art

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Mmhm. Lovely rhyme scheme aswell.
5/5
xx.Nothing-Gold-Can-Stay.xx

Hey this one is really sweet. i have some new poems if u want to check too :)

Wow ur poems are really amazing.. I love them all.
Keep up the fantastic writing!
And thanks for your comment

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First of all,thank you for commenting me. I can especially relate to this poem, Ilook forward to reading all of your poems

I loved this poem it reminds me of a good friend i have it is lovely

Heya thnx for the comment on my poem, this one is like so well written, i can't believe it. keep up the awesome work

You are very talented. i have a friend like that too. =/. keep up the good poems. thanx for the comment.

Tori