Detailed Love

by CoLliN   Jun 2, 2006


Dreamed about U

Where do I go from here?

When in my sleep I shed tear

Dreaming of the time we can have together

Thinking of your smile takes away my weather

Wondering if I’ll have you

Because I’d keep you forever

As I lay on a surface I don’t even know

Clouds, rain and the sunshine surrounds me

This must all be a show

We’re the center attraction

You lay on top of me with a body I can’t even see

And you put your face close to mine and ask if we can’t be

I’m wondering what’s holding me back

What is it that I lack?

Eye to eye and our lips barely connect

Pull each other’s head back just to make it correct

Don’t know what its all about

But its making me want to shout

Laying on my couch

And something bit me…!ouch!

I deserve much more than just a dream

Someone come and make us a team

Made this poem short and sweet just like you

Feeling sad?? Then I’ll be your pooh

Don’t know what you think about us two

But all I know is that I just dreamed about you

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  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I loved it the energy,..the feelin it gave....the way you separated each paragraph wow.....oen thing to add to emotion use comas and ... to add intensity..amamzing my FAVORITE OF YOURS WOWWWWWW

    excellent jobb bro/

    lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    Nice poem..i liked it...i like all the poems ive read...keep it up
    OXo Laura Marie aka Sweets