Thats pretty cool, I like the layout, its simplistic and its cute, great job
-Lenny

Simple and sweet!
loving it
keep writing
xoxo

That was a really cute poem. i hope they say yes!

Great poem. It was so sweet and well written. It had a nice flow. and I think you expressed in it very well...
Oh thanks for the comment

-Shannon

Awww.. thats so sweett! hehe.. it really made me smile.. that last stanza was just so cute.. the emotion in this poem is clear, and the flow is good, but maybe you could add a little more detail to the descriptions and such.. excellent write though! 5/5

Great poem! And thanks for the comment!

U would do anything to make a girl go out wit you is yo devoteness.. Awwww, this poem is so touchy..

I liked the first stanza the best, because of the way it flowed.

I think that this is always something that happens in life - two friends and one gets feeling for the other, so good job writing about it.

Brad

P.S. Sorry it took so long to comment back, I've been a busy boy, lol.