Omg wow i really really luv this it has to be one of my favorites eva!!! your such an awsome writer and its like every word has such a deep meaning behind it i can relate so much. keep positive gorgus xxx
luv monique

Omg lisb~~~~ AMAZING better than i can do,.... even tho i suck!!! WOW good job..i will see you at school

Ooo

I always thought of a shower as something that washed away my sins like jesus or god or sommit but that's ... good ... wow
You're a really good writer

...mia...

Aww this is so sad, it has a perfect choice of words =]

this is what i do when im upset just stand in the shower for a hour or sumfin lol

nyways i luved it

...{xXx}...leah...{oOo}...

Wow I'm at a loss for words, what a powerfull write. You managed to bring a tear to my eye which so few do, I hope this was not about you and if it was that you will find soemone to talk to. You have incredible talent and I will be back to read more of your stuff.
Tim

Aww.. that was really sad, almost made me cry. I love the whole thing about only God can judge her, because I believe that nobody is suposed to judge anyone except for God. You did a GREAT job on this! 5/5**

Oh gosh, you are fourteen? Amazing for your age, seriously enjoy your poems, very very well done!

PS. Reminded me that I could use a shower..

The water listens to her plea.

For only GOD will know her sin.
[Nice lines]
The gentle water understood.
It poured in rhythm to her heart.
[My favorite line]

This was very interesting... Very different from the normal cutting poems you read.. But not as dark, again, as I thought it could be. But good job, nonetheless.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

O' wow there really is nothing else for me to say this poem is so very good! I love it, great job,AnnMarie

Wow. I really liked this. I thought the flow and rythym was great. I can sort of relate accept I did not take my life soooo. Yeah. Great Write though.

Very creative shower theme, great flow and nice use of imagery. Great job on the rhymes too.

I did read this, yes i really liked it the ryming and the flow, n the message, i hope this neva happens though!!

Dam all i can say is that this poem was so excellent i give it a 5/5 but if i could i would give it more then a 5

Thats another nice poem

i loved this part

"She picked the shower cause she feels,
There's no where else to be.
And as she sits there crying,
The water listens to her plea"

keep it up!

Again, another excellent poem, and another 5/5

Wow, strong and powerful. Great vocabulary and flow. Can relate to this one in many ways! Great job! :) 5/5 Keep writing!

Stephanie

I really like this but I think you should pick a more interesting title. Something more catchy. The poem is really good though. 5/5

>black&&blue

Wow this poem isnt at all what i expected.the title really threw me off! in my opinion i think you should call it the rusty blade...something like that idk! or just keep it the same. but this is one of my favorite poems i have so far! imagery was fantastic!!! i really enjoyed it! also, i added you on my favorite authors. i loved every single line. all in all...i say 5/5

Wow this poem isnt at all what i expected.the title really threw me off! in my opinion i think you should call it the rusty blade...something like that idk! or just keep it the same. but this is one of my favorite poems i have so far! imagery was fantastic!!! i really enjoyed it! also, i added you on my favorite authors. i loved every single line. all in all...i say 5/5

Wow this poem was amazing i loved it keep them coming