I love how all your poems keep there meaning and still just flow you have serious talent hun make use of it you hear! xxxxx

Hey hows it going? i havn't heard from you in a long time, i havn't written anything for a long time until recently either though...so yes...this is awesome, i'm definatly more into rhyming but hey this was good i like the feelings expressed, i've never had it happen to me but i think you could understand how you felt...which is the point in writing..5/5 good job

I gave it a {4/5} because I don't think it has a right flow...Theres deffinite potential, so let me know when it is finished. I look forward to seeing the finished result.

[PygmyPuff]