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This is a very, very emotional poem... it paints the perfect picture of a person with blue eyes... well done..
Rain, it's a nice poem. I like how you have zoomed in on they eyes to tell your story. You have a small verb, subject disagreement in the first two lines, by the way. In general, a very nice effort.
by Daniel J
I liked this poem. I liked the content, and the rhyme (always my weak spot with poems). I also liked the use of repetition (refrain if you're a poem techy).
by Goran Rahim
Another great poem here.
i really enjoyed reading it specialy the part
His eyes...Blue eyes...
With water...his tears.
I only find myself slipping.
it was so touchy, great job like always