Comments : Blue Eyes

  • 13 years ago

    by HumanAngel

    This is a very, very emotional poem... it paints the perfect picture of a person with blue eyes... well done..

  • 13 years ago

    by Batscout

    Rain, it's a nice poem. I like how you have zoomed in on they eyes to tell your story. You have a small verb, subject disagreement in the first two lines, by the way. In general, a very nice effort.

  • 13 years ago

    by Daniel J

    I liked this poem. I liked the content, and the rhyme (always my weak spot with poems). I also liked the use of repetition (refrain if you're a poem techy).

  • 13 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great poem here.
    i really enjoyed reading it specialy the part
    His eyes...Blue eyes...
    Overflowing, dripping
    With water...his tears.
    I only find myself slipping.

    it was so touchy, great job like always