Nice job. 5/5

Im really bad at poems like these but ur very good 5/5

WOW.....all i can say is WOW! 5/5

This is sweet......... sorta i dont know but i know i love it!:) keep it up!:)

No giving, only taking in this mixture of skin and kiss
But its not whats in your pants, but your hugs i miss

^^ that's my favorite line.