by jennifer Jun 3, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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Today starts the rest of our lives, I knew together we'd make it this far, we met in that bar that Halloween night, from the moment we touched in my heart it felt so right. Today, tomorrow forever starts today. |
by Tara Kay
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It was good, well done |
by jennifer
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This poems a bit corny I know but hope everyone enjoys:) |
by PygmyPuff
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The first stanza is strong, but then the second and third are weak compared to it. You should strengthen the second and thrid and it will make for a truly wonderful poem. |