Taleee, I actually loved this poem, it was well written and the use of italian caught my eye. well done
xxxx

Awww.. i loved itt! that was so sweet and you can really tell that you are in love.. excellent poem! and i could understand a little of the italian because i speak some spanish and it is kind of similar, hehe.. the only problem i could find was here:

I've lost my sence of hearing, And I cannot hear you scream
^ i think its spelled "sense" not "sence" hehe..

excellent poem, you should definetely write more love ones! :) nice write! 5/5

Another excellent piece
, im so jelous!
...5/5

Bad hahaha that's a good one

Naw this poem is really great
I love it and you love him and he should love it lol so there ya go :D

LATA
>>MIA

Nothing wrong with this poem.. not as far as what i think.. "I'm longing to be in your arms, Wishing to feel your touch" I love that.. my ultimate dream.. very romantic and very sweet!

Nice work again
5/5
love
amy

Your poem is so sweet. The rhyming is great and it kept my attention. I love italian, and it's great that you included some in your poem.

Great job! 5/5

I like this the repetition is effective and so is the use of italian it was different and i like that and its great cause most ppl can relate i know i can yeah i liked it great job :D xxALLyxx

Omg no its great!!! really i love it, tho it doesnt relate to me all that much but its a very good poem. id rate it a 10 if i could!! and thnks for your comment! 5/5!

I like it, creative and original to have a different language in your poem. Very romantic.

Not your best. The other was better. But you asked for an honest opinion, so here goes. Some parts seem a little forced. The problem with rhyming poems is mostly to make them easily flow. When you have to resort to a word that rhymes, yet have to make it fit, it tends to sound forced, even for some of the best poets. My suggestion... practice by writing poetry that has no rhyme scheme. Use some of your innermost thoughts, and let the poem gain some rhyme on it's own. You'll find some of your best verses in this way. Thank you for your comments. They are very much appreciated.
Daniel

That was a fantastic poem... I love the little italian in it as well, hehe very romantic poem. You want honest feedback eh, well here it is, that poem is wonderful, i cant find anything wrong with, i wouldnt like it any other way. Its great the way it is.. well written. I can really relate.. oh man i wish i could write like u. 5/5 well done

Hey darl beautifully written p0em heartfelt lines great j0b 0n this. thank u f0r ur c0mment 0n my w0rk. meant al0t xx

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

Wow.. this poem was great! So much love! hehe .. it was so awesome! =) and I liked the 2 italian stanza's .. very well done =)

Aww sweet! I like it =]
Pheebs x

Nice job. i loved it 5/5

This is amazingly written. I love how you incorporated the Italian stanza. I love how I can read it, relate to it, and yet be interested in it as well. Good job.♥

That's not bad at all it's awesome:)..!!!

This is far from bad, this poem is freakin awsome !!! espacially the italian piece ! i loved it ! i adore it ! what i'm saying to say is that i'm speechless and that you've done an amazing job once again =)

5/5

~StefQ

This poem is so so sweet! Couldn't get any better! 5/5 Keep up the good work!

-Stephanie-