Cute and simple.
I like it. Shows the cute side to love.
Wasn't hard to read, flowed well. And I liked the little story to it.
Well done!
Keep it up.x

Awwww.. that is so sweet, and i can so relate! this had a lot of emotion, good descriptions, and a good flow! nice write! 5/5

@...Beautiful poem!!!shows tonnes of raw emotions...i think its a good poem...keep writting hun!!:):)...@
luv

It was emotional and sweet and cute. I enjoyed reading it, keep writing my friend, you have some talent.
xxxxx

I love the metaphoric comparison to winter. It gives great depth and value. I gave {5/5}

[PygmyPuff]

I love it because it shows the emotions very well...

Excellent write... nice rhyme...
great read
love
amy