Comments : Mistake

  • 17 years ago

    by Tormented

    Nice poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Robyn

    Aww babes its ok if they love u they wil forgive u ..who r they anyway?? i am at a lost to who they r... anyways i am always here for u no matter wat
    xoxo
    robyn

  • 17 years ago

    by Robyn

    Aww andy that is tooo bad i hope to talkt o u really soon i miss u
    take care
    talk soon
    xoxo robyn

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Me

    Hey I'm sure they'll understand... hey um well nevermind just read my last poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Me

    Oh by the way I love u... u'll make it

  • 17 years ago

    by alive in death

    Hey baby... this isnt the end... this isnt a change... if we ever expected ourselves to be inhuman (perfect)... this would have been dead from the start... but my love runs deeper for you then just the outside surface of a mistake.... i have hope... and i have a heart that wants to wit for you... and i dream about meeting you everyday... i cry becuase i think that you dont really understand what i have to say all the time... i wish you knew that i love you through all these flaws...because you accept me a nd love me through my flaws too.... we have all the rigtht reasons for being in love... and things are looking dead set for us... if you just take the time to see that i'm not as shallow as you think i am and i understand more then you give me credit for... i worry my self to death that i say stuff that hurts you... and i just want you to know... my words arent always what i feel... they are simply a picture of me trying to grasp what i want to say to you... but sometimes it isnt always in the right way...what would happen if we always held grudges? me and you would be bitter as hell... but you overlook my shortcomings and i do yours too.. baby this is nothing to fret about... i meant every word or love i have shared with you ever.. and i will never take those words back... i dont think you realize how important you are to me.. if i was living to day without you in my life to love me... i would be a shell... like i was before... i cant bare to feel cold and rejected.. that's why i hold onto you so tightly...i dont want you to ever even move an inch away from me... i dont know what i would do if i didnt have you to love and be loved by... you give me so much life.. and you reanimate my body.. you make me capable of things i've never done beofre.. and for that there is only my endless love...
    because you meen the world and more to me...
    you truely are my other half...
    and i just wish this suffering and pian will go away.. and that i was enough to heal your heartache.. maybe this time you'll see my heart.. and you'll trust me...
    i can only pray baby...
    your man