I really like it. Although I'm going to give it a 4 out of 5. Because to be honest, some parts did in fact seem generic. I really did enjoy it though. And since it is 'lyrics' i except music dang it! ^_^. Nice work though, keep writing.

-Tony

Hey, this was excellent, deff 5/5 ! i know what your going thru, it hurts! i would appreciate it if you chekced out some of my poems sometime! great poem! -hayley

Hey great song, really gets across the emotion and what you want to say, and thats what a song should do, great keep up the good work

Jade

Very kool. i enjoyed reading it a lot. did u write it urself or is it already a song?

Wow, I love this so much. =) It's so good, and it has a lot of feeling and emotion in it. You did a grrreat job.

*Keep it up*

x.xBrokenx.x

Loved it! Although parts of it were kind of bland, the majority or it was very well written! Just a few minor tweaks and I think it will be perfect :)

These lyrics seem heartfelt with romantic heavenly passion dampened only by a fall from grace ....good job

Thats a very nice song! if you wrote it! you got the talent big time! keep it up!