Cool how can you write poems like these, it is soo cool, i wrote one poem, for dark & fantasy, it is called "A nightmare" lol i tried writing anoyher one but didnt work lol

This is deep yet so true, we walk amoung the dead and yet only so few can see the pain dwelled within, you are a great writer again I say MCR could make a song for you!

It's a powerful piece, very deep and intense. I like it a lot. Keep it up.