Wow, what a wonderful poem. I enjoyed it. It has such imagery and the flow and concept was great.

Lovely Poem Megan.

Love MKKA!

A really good unique poem, well done

sarah

Ok.....wow! I'm sorry i don't know really what else to say. This poem both confused and aroused my attention! The diction was just amazing!....WOW!

Although I didn't understand all the words in the first couple of stanzas the images were very clear.
I loved this it was so dark and evocative.

Wow really long......whew did i MENTION it was long???

It was a really good poem it was very descriptive, the flow was nice and the structure was put together well

Do another two please
-ann

5/5....that was EXCELLENT!!! At first i thought that the guy was really the Devil and that the girl was his puppet but then you explained it and i was awed!!!...You use a lot of big words..lol..thats not a bad thing...i just thought i'd point that out,,,anyways keep writting these amazing poems~~
God Bless- Lisa