Kool as usual. Kepp smiling mate. Bring light to my day : )
-Suz

Great poem! i liked it very much! keep it up!

Oh wow, i really liked the story behind your words on this one, it really drew me in. Keep up the good work 5/5 :)
-Jenna xo

Wow! thats so strong, amazing poem. good work

love sammi

WOW!!!! you never cease to amaze me...

Exellent!

RLS

The second time I read it.... and it hit my heart hard. I didn't quite get a picture like I did the first time I read it. Your poetry is woderful, and you should neve stop writing.

Hola amigo mio!
How are you PG? It has been a while. I just wanna let you know that I enjoyed reading your poem, you're such an amazing poet! Hope things are going good your way... hugs my friend.

Wow gr8 work again. no suprise there tho:D ur always gr8. love the details again, its amazing. it really painted a picture in my mind. 5/5

You amaze me every time! Great job. you have a way of making me see the whole thing. It was supurb, but what's new? all your writing is!

Amberinaa*

Much love

Congratulations on your placing in my contest

this is a a great poem it had a sort of rhythm to it which was very effective, i could imagine drums while i was reading it very enjoyable and great flow with unobtrousive rhyming
xxALLYxx

How come more people don't read your poems? You have a future in this, and I hope it is what you go for. It is quite promising in your case my Dear. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.