Aaawww this is so amazing
it is really sweet
makes me happy
great poem
well done

**smile**

I thought the rhymes were pretty well done, and I think that if you fixed up all the grammatical errors this would be a really presentable poem.

Wow, thats so amazing. i love how real and true this is. i felt this same way before i told my bf i loved him, so i waited till he said it first! lol anyways, loved it so much