Bloody Brilliant!! Your choice of words were amazing, and the darkness in it was quite a treat for me, an excellent vacation from the simplex writing i've been reading all day, absolutly wonderfull, i'd give it higher than just a 5 if i could - but a 5 shall have to work

Wow...................... your vocabulary, the imagery, wow.... you're seriously talented. keep it up!
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I love the words in this poem. all descriptive and i could never think of writing them. unique and amazing.

Phew, that poem was a good read, tho I aint too into darkness, it was a good poem. The words you managed you put in there. You have greate talent. Well done. keep it up

An amazing read... The dark description and powerful images that you potray is so captivating... Great flow of words and amazing choice of words...

Definitely 5/5 from me...