I like this poem, great expression here. well done... nice rhymes and perfect flow. keep it up..

My toxic personality,
is causing drama yet again,
infecting everyone I care about,
leaving them verbally slain.
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Loved that stanza. This was a great poem. You expressed yourself really clearly. Keep it up =] 5/5

.x.TaLeEe.x.

"I crushed you with it's load,"
just its, no apostrophe needed.

I think that if you added another stanza that finishes up the angelic cure concept, that would end the poem a bit better. I thought it was good, and the intro stanza really interested me.

Awesome! you should be so happy with your writing, you are amazing! be proud.
take care,
sammi xxx

Oooh, I really like this. The opening stanza just rocks!!!
You kept such a steady flow throughout and still managed to convey yourself completely, well done!
Take care and keep it up~Holly

It's really a amazing poem. It starts very well... And the whole poem is very strong... Great work!

Lovely!

inspired by Brittany? or no?

Another great poem

lana