This is a really good poem that expresses a lot of feeling. I can totally relate to it. Keep up the good work!
~Violet~

Oh yup. I liked this alot. It was really good. The flow and rhyming were great and it was just so sweet. You also used really good imagry. Keep it up! It was awesome. 5/5

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"We would kiss once again,
a sercret prayer"

I especially love those lines (even though you spelt "secret" wrong) I loved all the metaphors you used and EVERYTHING!! You could tell it was very passionate and you said it with your whole heart and never left anything out. Truly amazing poem. I loved it =)

Beautiful job, very romantic. You can still add more descriptions.

This is a beautiful poem, I love it. The last stanza was my favorite, it was the perfect ending.

Great job! 5/5

Loved it i could actually feel the love that the poem was expression 5/5

^_^ That was a work of pure brilliane. I've never read a better poem that contains a rhyming scheme. It had great concept, good focus, wonderful flow, and you definitely kept to the shceme, which many writers tend to fall out of near the end. You kept it strong through all of it. Plus I just loved the descriptions and imagery of it. It implants a nice picture of love in my head. All of it rings true.

-Tony

Aww. this is adorable. i wish i had love like yours. this is a great poem, cute and it brought a smile to my face. great writing.

Awwww.. that is so adorable and sweet! i loved it.. it contained so much emotion, great language and descriptions, and the rhymes were a little forced but still worked well.. nice write! 5/5

Very cute and sweet! i loved it a lot! it brounght a smile to me =]