This poem left me smiling because its very true. i like it 5/5

sarah

I liked this it was really light and cute.
Yay for the'smooshed' spider lol

This isn't a funny poem.. -Raises eyebrow- ... But more dark... But whatever floats your boat, you put it where you want. I really liked it though.. It was very interesting.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Lol! that made me laugh! great jobb.. 5/5

Nicely written! It is very light hearted and I like the flow to it even though the lines aren't the same length. There are just a couple of spelling errors to check, but apart from that it's great!

The words didnt flow as much as in the other poems of yours that i'v read but it was still Good. A good idea for a poem. Very creative!! A bit of rhyming and some not..you have a unique style.=D

HaHa! i hate bugs too, and get freaked out at night sometimes, but i say to my self "close ur eyes everything woulf be okay" and well i just fall asleep!

good poem! thanks for all the comments on my poems means alot to me 5/5

Keep it up!