Wow that was really good! thats better than anything i could write!

I like it.
this stanza is my favorite
but what other people will never know
that these cuts go deeper than the skin
they come from inside her broken heart
the pain from so deep within

Really emotional. it doesnt sound like its quite finished yet. . .?
Like it wcould keep on going, but other then that it was beautiful!

Much loves
Amberinaa*

So good
i really liked it
5/5 awesum
~AllCutUp~

Hey i luv this one,, ur such a beautiful poet u know...
its such a sad but lovely poem

[xxx] leah [ooo]

I really liked this poem its really sad though but i can relate great work xoxoxxo 5/5

Thats another nice one! i lved the ending it flowed very well!

the poem was filled with sadness and depressed, and yet sometimes parents notice the things that happen but still dont take action in it!

keep it up!

My Fav stanza :

' The innocence of childhood
Was replaced with thoughts of death
She always cried herself to sleep each night
Praying for her last breath '

It's so .. me ..
I've never read better poems than yours ..!!
keep it up ..!!

Another beatufully written peice, well done chica!
"The innocence of childhood
Was replaced with thoughts of death
She always cried herself to sleep each night
Praying for her last breath"

my fav. part. but i think you should change "She always cried herself to sleep each night" to "She always cried herself to sleep". i dunno. i think it flows much better, but hey, dont listen to me. 5/5 on my part chica!

"Her childhood she had lost
And she never got it back
The thing she craved the most was love
The one thing she did lack"

wow..that line really hit me...
amazing job
dont stop writing
extremely well written poem. doesnt need any changes.
^_^
xx

Okay...wow. words cant explain how well written this poem is. this is just more then amazing. you have such talent.

Her childhood she had lost
And she never got it back
The thing she craved the most was love
The one thing she did lack

This line...it just simply hit home for me. its my favorite part. I wish i could say more about this..but im like speechless about it. Keep the excellent work coming. 5/5